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Signed-off-by: Thomas Sedlmayer <tsedlmayer@pmsfit.de>
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osi_object.proto

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// semi-tractor.
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// Characteristics compared to a regular trailer are the large size,
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// the fact that a large portion of the weight is supported at the
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// hitch and a large overlap with the towing vehicle, i.e. the
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// hitch, and a large overlap with the towing vehicle, i.e. the
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// semi-tractor.
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//
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// \note Corresponds roughly with UNECE [1] category O4.
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TYPE_SEMITRAILER = 8;
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// A trailer is a non-motorized vehicle designed for being towed by
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// a motorized vehicle to carry goods, animals or people.
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// a motorized vehicle to carry goods, animals, or people.
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//
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// \note Corresponds roughly with UNECE [1] category O1 to O3.
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//
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// A motorcycle is a motorized vehicle designed primarily for
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// passenger transportation.
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// Compared to a car, typically fewer passive safety features such
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// as a full passenger cell are present.
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// This category includes typical two-wheeled motorcycles, but also
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// three-wheeled vehicles like motorcycles with side-cars or even
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// trikes.
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// Compared to a car, fewer passive safety features, such as a full
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// passenger cell, are typically present.
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// This category includes both two-wheeled motorcycles and
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// three-wheeled vehicles like motorcycles with side-cars or trikes.
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//
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// \note Corresponds roughly with UNECE [1] categories L1 to L5.
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//
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// A bicycle is a human-powered or motor-assisted, pedal-driven
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// vehicle.
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// This category includes typical two-wheeled bicycles, but
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// also cargo-bikes and alike with more than two wheels.
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// This category includes typical two-wheeled bicycles as well as
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// cargo-bikes and other pedal-driven vehicles with more than two
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// wheels.
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//
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// \note Usually considered as a vulnerable road user.
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//
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// The rail infrastructure may fully or partially overlap with
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// public road infrastructure.
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// In contrast to trains, trams do not have exclusive right-of-way.
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// Often as a series of connected vehicles.
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// A tram often acts as a series of connected vehicles.
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//
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TYPE_TRAM = 13;
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// A train is a vehicle designed for the transport of passengers and
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// freight on rail infrastructure.
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// freight on rail infrastructure.
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// The rail infrastructure for trains is mostly grade-separated from
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// the public road infrastructure as trains have exclusive
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// right-of-way.
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// Therefore, in case crossings with the road infrastructure occur,
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// the exclusive right-of-way is ensured, e.g. by railway barriers.
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// Often as a series of connected vehicles.
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// A train often acts as a series of connected vehicles.
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//
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TYPE_TRAIN = 14;
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TYPE_STANDUP_SCOOTER = 17;
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// A micro-mobility device is a small, lightweight vehicle for
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// short-distance travel like hoverboards or roller skates.
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// While bicycles, stand-up scooters and wheelchairs may technically
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// fall into this category, the respective detailed categories shall
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// be used instead.
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// short-distance travel, like hoverboards or roller skates.
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// While bicycles, stand-up scooters, and wheelchairs may
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// technically fall into this category, the respective detailed
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// categories shall be used instead.
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//
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// \note Usually considered as a vulnerable road user.
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//
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TYPE_MICROMOBILITY_DEVICE = 18;
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// A work-machine is a vehicle designed for specific tasks (e.g.,
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// A work machine is a vehicle designed for specific tasks (e.g.,
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// construction equipment, agricultural tractors, forklifts).
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//
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TYPE_WORK_MACHINE = 19;
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// A watercraft is a vehicle designed for travel on water (boats,
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// ships, etc.).
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//
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// \note This category is intentionally unspecific and may be
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// detailed out in future versions if use-cases require so.
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// \note This category is deliberately generic and may be refined in
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// future versions as needed.
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//
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TYPE_WATERCRAFT = 20;
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// An aircraft is a vehicle designed for flight through the air
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// (airplanes, helicopters, etc.).
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//
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// \note This category is intentionally unspecific and may be
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// detailed out in future versions if use-cases require so.
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// \note This category is deliberately generic and may be refined in
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// future versions as needed.
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//
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TYPE_AIRCRAFT = 21;
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// A land vehicle is a vehicle designed for travel on land.
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//
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// \note This category is intentionally unspecific and may be
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// detailed out in future versions if use-cases require so.
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// \note This category is deliberately generic to include land
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// vehicles that do not fall into other categories and may be
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// refined in future versions as needed.
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//
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TYPE_LAND_VEHICLE = 22;
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}

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