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iliakan · iliakan · commit dc0a6384207c · 2019-08-05T19:00:59.000+03:00
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 How to find out the width and height of the browser window? How to get the full width and height of the document, including the scrolled out part? How to scroll the page using JavaScript?
 
-From the DOM point of view, the root document element is `document.documentElement`. That element corresponds to `<html>` and has geometry properties described in the [previous chapter](info:size-and-scroll). For some cases we can use it, but there are additional methods and peculiarities important enough to consider.
+For most such requests, we can use the root document element `document.documentElement`, that corresponds to `<html>` tag. But there are additional methods and peculiarities important enough to consider.
 
 ## Width/height of the window
 
-Properties `clientWidth/clientHeight` of `document.documentElement` is exactly what we want here:
+To get window width and height we can use `clientWidth/clientHeight` of `document.documentElement`:
 
 ![](document-client-width-height.svg)
 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Browsers also support properties `window.innerWidth/innerHeight`. They look like
 
 If there exists a scrollbar, and it occupies some space, `clientWidth/clientHeight` provide the width/height without it (subtract it). In other words, they return width/height of the visible part of the document, available for the content.
 
-...And `window.innerWidth/innerHeight` ignore the scrollbar.
+...And `window.innerWidth/innerHeight` include the scrollbar.
 
 If there's a scrollbar, and it occupies some space, then these two lines show different values:
 ```js run
@@ -35,14 +35,14 @@ In most cases we need the *available* window width: to draw or position somethin
 ```warn header="`DOCTYPE` is important"
 Please note: top-level geometry properties may work a little bit differently when there's no `<!DOCTYPE HTML>` in HTML. Odd things are possible.
 
-In modern HTML we should always write `DOCTYPE`. Generally that's not a JavaScript question, but here it affects JavaScript as well.
+In modern HTML we should always write `DOCTYPE`.
 ```
 
 ## Width/height of the document
 
-Theoretically, as the root document element is `documentElement.clientWidth/Height`, and it encloses all the content, we could measure its full size as `documentElement.scrollWidth/scrollHeight`.
+Theoretically, as the root document element is `documentElement.clientWidth/Height`, and it encloses all the content, we could measure document full size as `documentElement.scrollWidth/scrollHeight`.
 
-These properties work well for regular elements. But for the whole page these properties do not work as intended. In Chrome/Safari/Opera if there's no scroll, then `documentElement.scrollHeight` may be even less than  `documentElement.clientHeight`! Sounds like a nonsense, weird, right?
+But on that element, for the whole page, these properties do not work as intended. In Chrome/Safari/Opera if there's no scroll, then `documentElement.scrollHeight` may be even less than  `documentElement.clientHeight`! Sounds like a nonsense, weird, right?
 
 To reliably obtain the full document height, we should take the maximum of these properties:
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ Why so? Better don't ask. These inconsistencies come from ancient times, not a "
 
 DOM elements have their current scroll state in `elem.scrollLeft/scrollTop`.
 
-For document scroll `document.documentElement.scrollLeft/Top` works in most browsers, except oldler WebKit-based ones, like Safari (bug [5991](https://bugs.webkit.org/show_bug.cgi?id=5991)), where we should use  `document.body` instead of `document.documentElement` there.
+For document scroll `document.documentElement.scrollLeft/Top` works in most browsers, except oldler WebKit-based ones, like Safari (bug [5991](https://bugs.webkit.org/show_bug.cgi?id=5991)), where we should use `document.body` instead of `document.documentElement`.
 
 Luckily, we don't have to remember these peculiarities at all, because the scroll is available in the special properties `window.pageXOffset/pageYOffset`:
 
@@ -83,20 +83,18 @@ For instance, if we try to scroll the page from the script in `<head>`, it won't
 
 Regular elements can be scrolled by changing `scrollTop/scrollLeft`.
 
-We can do the same for the page, but as explained above:
-- For most browsers (except older Webkit-based) `document.documentElement.scrollTop/Left` is the right property.
-- Otherwise, `document.body.scrollTop/Left`.
+We can do the same for the page using `document.documentElement.scrollTop/Left` (except Safari, where `document.body.scrollTop/Left` should be used instead).
 
-These cross-browser incompatibilities are not good. Fortunately, there's a simpler,  universal solution: special methods  [window.scrollBy(x,y)](mdn:api/Window/scrollBy) and [window.scrollTo(pageX,pageY)](mdn:api/Window/scrollTo).
+Alternatively, there's a simpler, universal solution: special methods  [window.scrollBy(x,y)](mdn:api/Window/scrollBy) and [window.scrollTo(pageX,pageY)](mdn:api/Window/scrollTo).
 
-- The method `scrollBy(x,y)` scrolls the page relative to its current position. For instance, `scrollBy(0,10)` scrolls the page `10px` down.
+- The method `scrollBy(x,y)` scrolls the page *relative to its current position*. For instance, `scrollBy(0,10)` scrolls the page `10px` down.
 
     ```online
     The button below demonstrates this:
 
     <button onclick="window.scrollBy(0,10)">window.scrollBy(0,10)</button>
     ```
-- The method `scrollTo(pageX,pageY)` scrolls the page to absolute coordinates, so that the top-left corner of the visible part has coordinates `(pageX, pageY)` relative to the document's top-left corner. It's like setting `scrollLeft/scrollTop`.
+- The method `scrollTo(pageX,pageY)` scrolls the page *to absolute coordinates*, so that the top-left corner of the visible part has coordinates `(pageX, pageY)` relative to the document's top-left corner. It's like setting `scrollLeft/scrollTop`.
 
     To scroll to the very beginning, we can use `scrollTo(0,0)`.
 
