im) Improve first-post readability

Author: joaoptpsa

src/_posts/2025-11-30-first-post.markdown

@@ -15,22 +15,20 @@ On 2025-12-01 (Monday), Portugal celebrates the [Restoration of Independence](ht
 
 This begat my Blog — but how?
 
-I had reserved the extended weekend to migrate my old and rusty [Manjaro](https://manjaro.org/) install to a fresh [`archinstall`](https://wiki.archlinux.org/title/Archinstall) with [Omarchy](https://omarchy.org/) [^omarchy].
+I had chosen this extended weekend to migrate my old and rusty [Manjaro](https://manjaro.org/) install to a fresh [`archinstall`](https://wiki.archlinux.org/title/Archinstall) with [Omarchy](https://omarchy.org/) [^omarchy].
 
 Excluding some minor issues[^lol], that went about pretty fast.
 
-But because I had already set aside time for this monstrous task...
+But because I had already set aside time...
 And because at least one person (not counting my wife) has told me that I'm bearable enough when speaking about certain topics of my peculiar interest, I decided to start writing.
 
 ## Chronogram
 
-So after:
+1. Attended [Tim Bernardes](https://www.timbernardes.com/) show Saturday night.
+2. Learned a bit of [`mise`](https://mise.jdx.dev/) [^mise].
+3. Learned a bit of [Jekyll](https://jekyllrb.com/).
 
-1. Attending [Tim Bernardes](https://www.timbernardes.com/) show Saturday night — completely unrelated btw.
-2. Learning a bit of [`mise`](https://mise.jdx.dev/) [^mise].
-3. Learning a bit of [Jekyll](https://jekyllrb.com/).
-
-And just like that, this blog was (maybe) created.
+And just like that, my blog happened to spawn.
 
 ## Future work
 
@@ -40,7 +38,6 @@ As you all know:
 
 - Maybe I'll drop my love for the Em dash.
 - Maybe as time goes by this blog will become more work than fun and my happy writing style will gradually become more meaningless technical jargon and more boring.
-- Maybe I won't...
 - Maybe...
 
 ## Footnotes
@@ -49,8 +46,8 @@ As you all know:
 
 [^lol]:
     Two things were annoying:
-    First, my motherboard only was looking in `/boot/EFI/BOOT/` and not in `/boot/EFI/limine/` making me ~~want to cry~~ the unchallenged world record holder for most manual Arch install in 120 minutes.
-    Secondly there is a new Bitwarden issue [#17598](https://github.com/bitwarden/clients/issues/17598) that I didn't know about and it drove me crazy for a couple hours.
+    First, my motherboard only was not looking in `/boot/EFI/limine/` making me ~~want to cry~~ the unchallenged world record holder for most manual Arch install within 120 minutes.
+    Secondly there is a new Bitwarden issue [#17598](https://github.com/bitwarden/clients/issues/17598) that I didn't know about and it ruined my post install experience by driving me crazy for a couple hours.
 
 [^mise]:
     `mise` is turning out to be great — I had been waiting for `PHP` to be added as a [core tool](https://mise.jdx.dev/core-tools.html) to justify the _small_ learning hit.