Update render-and-commit.md

Author: siddtheone

src/content/learn/render-and-commit.md

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ There are two reasons for a component to render:
 
 ### Initial render {/*initial-render*/}
 
-Intial render is like React is making the customers comfortable when they arrive, by offering them water without them asking for anything.
+The initial render in React is like making customers comfortable when they arrive by offering them water before they ask for anything.
 
 When your app starts, you need to trigger the initial render. Frameworks and sandboxes sometimes hide this code, but it's done by calling [`createRoot`](/reference/react-dom/client/createRoot) with the target DOM node, and then calling its `render` method with your component: