overview tweaks

Author: nicktrn

docs/self-hosting/overview.mdx

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 ## Should you self-host?
 
-For most users, Trigger.dev Cloud offers the best experience - it's fully managed, scalable, and comes with dedicated support. However, if you have specific requirements around data residency, compliance, or infrastructure control, self-hosting may be the right choice for you.
+Trigger.dev Cloud is fully managed, scalable, and comes with dedicated support. For most users, it offers the best experience. However, if you have specific requirements around data residency, compliance, or infrastructure control, self-hosting may be the right choice for you.
 
 The self-hosted version is functionally the same as Trigger.dev Cloud with [some exceptions](#feature-comparison), but our managed Cloud infrastructure is designed for high availability, security, and scale.
 
-Because we do not manage self-hosted instances, we cannot guarantee how Trigger.dev will perform on your infrastructure. You assume all responsibility and risk for your deployment, including security, uptime, and data integrity.
+Because we don't manage self-hosted instances, we cannot guarantee how Trigger.dev will perform on your infrastructure. You assume all responsibility and risk for your deployment, including security, uptime, and data integrity.
 
-You can read the rest of this overview and follow our guides for instructions on setting up a self-hosted Trigger.dev instance. If you prefer a managed experience, you can [sign up](https://cloud.trigger.dev/login) for our Cloud offering instead - we have a generous [free tier](https://trigger.dev/pricing) for you to try it out.
+For more details, carry on reading and follow our guides for instructions on setting up a self-hosted Trigger.dev instance. If you prefer a managed experience, you can [sign up](https://cloud.trigger.dev/login) for our Cloud offering instead - we have a generous [free tier](https://trigger.dev/pricing) for you to try it out.
 
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