installguide: minor wording and grammar fixes#161
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I don't like the over capitalisation taken from anglosaxon media, but overall this looks good. two lgtm so merging |
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Thank you for the feedback @DaanHoogland. I would be more than happy to create another pull request and reword the titles to use less capitalization, if you want. I just built packages for 4.14. As I install CloudStack again, I figured I would go through the documentation and improve where appropriate. I typically capitalize titles in documentation, but I can understand if they strike a non-neutral tone. I'll remember to use less capitalization for any future CloudStack PRs. |
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No worries @falcon78921 . thanks you for your contributions. |
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Documentation improvements for building CloudStack from source.